- Erotic Poetry
- Aftershocks
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Click here"Fuck, oh god, I'm....."
Her cries cut short
At the continued adorations
Of her swollen clit
Hips bucking, mouth open, body tense
As she is overcome by her pleasure
Riding the lightning of delight
A gush of hot fluid
As a second wave crashes
Her entire being trapped in a staccato rhythm
For the briefest moment she appears like a scratched dvd
The perfect stuttering instant flickering in time
Watching her tremble
Her body shaking uncontrollably
Slick and wet with her arousal
Any touch exciting frayed nerves
The pleasure bordering on pain
A shiver as I lick her clit again
She strikes at my teasing dancing fingers
I chuckle devilishly
Smiling between her thighs
We have just begun.......
- COMMENTS
Tsothaabout 10 years agoI haven't watched too many DVDs but do they flicker, when there is a scratch? I imagine it would cause crazy image artifacts, instead... :) That was the centerpiece of your poem, a simile, but it made me stop to consider what I said above... Probably not your intention, right? Hehe! Damn those pesky readers, ruining poems...
todski28almost 11 years agoAuthorPlus having a stickler for grammar and spelling keeps us honest as writers :-)
Cumming, isn't that the best way to keep things?
erectus123almost 11 years agoUsually "God" (1st line) is capitalized, why? ask him...please keep'em cumming
