Agaisnt the Flow

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-- against the flow --
I'm lost in the flow of time
my paddles lost
the sea swell steals soul
remove my essance
set me adrift for years to come
years to come
then I return
twisted, differant
not the same, but the same
my soul dead, rasied, and pervereted
back from the dead I retrun
a member of the masses

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Decent Attempt.

You have that special spark ~ the only thing detrimental to your poem is your atrocious spelling. Your spell checker could help you a great deal with that.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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I have two words for you ~

Spell check;

Without it your message is getting lost.

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