- Illustrated Poetry
- Al·Gharb·6
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6.
the serene profile the metal unchained sculpted
in these rocks the desolate confidence
in time in entail of death
in perpetual motion
the tender generosity of
silence
distil
our incommensurable pride our steps
of ash our battles
in circles
into dust
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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LeBrozover 17 years agoWith this photo almost instills a mystical aura to your words; or is it the other way around?
Anonymousover 18 years agoI just went back and read all 6 in series, truely beautiful Lauren. I hope you intend on submitting the series somewhere.... an electronic chapbook? They should be seen by more people. ~as
sophia janeover 18 years agoBoth the illustration and the poem are striking in their beauty. Great job!
steve porterover 18 years ago...compelled to go back and read the others in this series...striking, dynamic pics, lauren...did you take these (can you tell me, and where)...i'm thinking probably so...beautiful, transcendent words too...thanks.
