- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Alchemy
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Straight faced; searching for a broken seraphim
Straight laced; Malevolence clad in ethical influence
Abhorrent invectives spill from your shining smile
Your toxic melody; harmony between hatred and devotion
Disfiguring my psyche; between this earth and a hell of our creation
Ill fated illusions; mutilation of my body and soul
Dispatching unprovoked, psychotic rage
Fearing nothing; Feeling less
My loss dotting the tiles red
Desecrating my love, corrupting my life
Liberate me from self loathing
Elucidate for me; the brutality of your adoration
Deliberate atrocities, razing my sanity
My agony, your ecstasy,
This catharsis, my deliverance
Corrupted deification, grace and deception intermingled
Life crumbling away, apathy reigns
Drowning in mediocrity, arrogant in its simplicity
Ambivalence mocking my fragile acquiescence
Asphyxiating together in the tragic reality
That everything's fine
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoWelcome to Lit with a rather impressive piece. Now I hope you've gotten all those nice large words out of your system. They are impressive but when overused tend to lose emotional impact, and most times that is what poetry is about ~ emotional impact. Now take your obvious talent and rein in the vocabulary and look for the simpler words and phrases that most times can carry quite a punch.
