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Click hereAlejo fell asleep
to this
I dare not move
when too deep
breaths rumble
blinking lids
claps like thunder
might burst
the bubble
for he
only
he deserves
to rest
through my insomnia
insatiable
in peace
Alejo fell to this
and will ascend
to this
again
i pray
for patience
peace
to let the loudest
thoughts sink deep
to not disturb
disrupt his ease
cradle that weary head
slumbered scarred
upon my breath held
careful bosom bed
so that later
come tomorrow
daylight dawn
he'll carry me
Alejo
mi amore
sleep
Your word choices were exquisite. Such stark and clear images. Lovely rendering.
Randi, I enjoy your spacing and your word choices. Your poetry is rather new to me so I will be watching out for you ;)
this is my favorite part-
cradle that weary head
slumbered scarred
upon my breath held
careful bosom bed
so beautiful..
If they ever fix the edit feature i would add this as a favorite.
Such a contrast between the minimal words and the incredible feelings they stir.
Really a masterpiece
Thank you