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variation 1:
all night
windowless office
in the morning
snow outdoors
variation 2:
eyes hovered over the keyboard all night
blinked at the snow outdoors in the morning
wlodzimierz holsztynski ©
1996-02-28
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LeBrozover 17 years ago~~
2 has that certain appeal for the wordiness in me, but I've always preferred the first for its economy of words which make it feel more powerful; the view that less is more.
