- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Alone
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I feel so alone
Everyones around
My thoughts are my own
I dont make a sound
Its all so bland
My world comes down
But still I cant stand
The only one with a frown
I look everywhere
Searching for an aid
No one seems to care
Slowly all beings to fade
No one can relate
I sit here and think
Do nothing but wait
Until deeper I sink
I dont know what to do
Nothing will suffice
I wonder about you
And again roll the dice
Everyones here
Except who I need
Im alone with my fear
To which I heed
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoAmen to that, YDD.
This carries the lack of punctuation to new heights with not only no commas or periods, but no apostrophes for the contractions or possessives! Detracts from the piece's good elements.
YDDabout 20 years agoAt least you are consistent and use no punctuation of any kind at all,
And your rhyme is good.
The meter could use some work.
