Also We Bleed

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Heavy on the slang, we dance around
the room, waiting for the other to speak.
We know there is tenseness,
We don't want to appear weak.

Knowing the other in ways one does in the by and by.
We long for the speech to end and the sparks to fly.
Fire, beginning in the memories and ways of the mind,
Shakes like a jolt, then evaporates in time.

Tired and longing for sleep, never a goodbye,
Only until tomorrow, we sigh...
We know that the next time will be fun and yet,
It is hard to wait, both older, knowing the bet.

The excitement is goofy, yet we know it will be
A muse, a reenactment, we know, we see...
We know, we are friends, but in a moment in time,
It's all a whirl, it's all very sublime.

Tracing the line, we come to the now,
Wanting to rest, it's been overwhelming and so...
Always friends, there is that magic just like in the past,
We know it was always to be, we know it will last.

Thank you my friend, I have no regrets.
Where will my life be in 10 years, there is nothing set.
Wanting you to know I have fun with you
I will be and want to be always funny and not blue.

We leave one another with a smile and a laugh,
"remember my feet" begins the so-long.
We know it is only for a moment
and nothing went wrong.

The gray it's not clear, that's okay, it's a hue.
It need not be something big, just because we are 2.
Knowing there is care, that's all we need,
We both know we have fun and also we bleed.

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todski28todski28almost 9 years ago
I think this is the frame work

for something that would readf ok, however there is too much in the way of the good stuff, too much attempt at prose sentencing