tagErotic PoetryAm I a bad person?

Am I a bad person?

byDeepGreenEyes©

She placed
her half-drained Corona
on the clingy wet napkin.

"When you look at a child
who has never felt joy
there is a dullness.
But when you see a child
who knows love
and had it robbed...

Which is worse?
the one who will never know
or the one who has known
and must live with the loss?"

I narrowed my eyes
thoughtfully
seriously
trying trying to feel
the plight of the children
but all I could think of
was her
and how much
I wanted to fuck her.

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by Anonymous03/22/17

Well Done....

For some reason I think this Poem would be more suited in the 'Non-Erotic' section, don't get me wrong that's not a bad thing, I prefer to read 'non-Erotic' Poems, I just Clicked on this section out ofmore...

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by karaline09/14/16

Ha ha...

well played

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