- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Am I wIcked?
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Am I wicked to wish you
could go now to your rest?
I cannot bear to see you
lost inside yourself.
unresponsive to my touch
unknowing I am here.
are you there behind
clouded unfocused eyes?
tears can't bring you back
if only they could
reach far enough
to release you.
we that will be left
behind without you
mourn already the loss,
the you already gone,
no longer of this world
on your own plane
of suffering.
God please forgive
my prayers
and take her now.
- COMMENTS
JWrenover 9 years agoI'm sure many can relate to these heartfelt words and feelings. God bless.
JWrenover 9 years agoI'm sure many can relate to these heartfelt words and feelings. God bless.
JWrenover 9 years agoI'm sure many can relate to these heartfelt words and feelings. God bless.
JWrenover 9 years agoI'm sure many can relate to these heartfelt words and feelings. God bless.
normal jeanalmost 15 years agoI felt the same way as I watched my m om suffer with COPD for years and years. I too wished that God would take her and end her suffering. I don't think that is wrong, to wish someone a better place than they are and don't allow guilt to trap you. You are brave to expose your feelings. If only others would so kindly, this place would be a better place.
~ NJ
