Amante II

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Part 2 of the 15 part series

Updated 05/12/2022
Created 06/22/2004
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Now again the night is sentinal.
Curtains flicker their small nods,
approving us as we complete

the darkness, blooming in the first
brush of lips, smooth petals, winged,
unfolding to grasp the taste.

Stars glow in our mouths, falling rising
chest in restless flutter. We are birds,
roused from the nest, awakening

to undo, release, trail essence
sucked from skin like nectar
to take flight, take me on you,

over you, locked at chakras.
Souls join hips, foreheads, mouths
murmurSo Good. Amante this pull

and push aches sweet when we
swallow the pulse of life, poised
like animals, lifted in your hands.

We are cerebral. We are beyond
reason, awash in sigh, cresting,
drenched in moonlit humanity.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,500 poems.

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fawniefawnieover 19 years ago
most excellent!!

you captured the essence of erotica here.

beautiful, fully enjoyable! ty!

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
Another...

...beautiful piece of erotic writing, Eleanora. Thank you for this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Ertica?

what a fine example. It has all the right elements said in a complimentary voice.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
why this

didn't get an E is beyond me.

One of the most sensual romantic sexy things I've read in a long time.

Perfect

Right words, right phrasing, right tempo

It's like a slow samba playing at dusk

beautiful

Thank you

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