Amante III

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Part 3 of the 15 part series

Updated 05/12/2022
Created 06/22/2004
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Whose arms hold you in the night
when fear crosses your cheek
under the wing of shadow?
Whose arms?

Whose eyes watch yours shade
with pleasure or sadness?
Who sees your face twist
with pain or passion?
Whose eyes, Amante?

Who carries your secrets
carefully as weeping children?
Who holds them close, loves you
even when their fingers are jagged,
even when they cut and hurt?

Who listens to the whisper of your truth?
Who forgives the stumble of your lies?

Who lays beside you in the pale
wash of moon and chides the morning
for tarrying too long in your dreams?

Usted sabe quién somos, mi amor.
Usted sabe quiénes somos.
Siempre aqui.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,500 poems.

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Lovely

Lovely and enchanting - Simple yet with an elegant grace.

poetboy824poetboy824over 19 years ago
sonriso

y yo soy aqui para ti

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
lovely

I need to read parts I and II, if I haven't already. I'd like to read the three of them in order. Will there be more?

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
These

just keep getting better and better.

And this:

~Who carries your secrets

carefully as weeping children?

Who holds them close, loves you

even when their fingers are jagged,

even when they cut and hurt? ~

Stunning

Thank you

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