Amante IX

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Part 5 of the 15 part series

Updated 05/12/2022
Created 06/22/2004
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Amor falls its rain on us, querida.
Kisses soothe cooling drops upon my neck.
How the fingernail moon smiles mi vida,
as if to sing that it is at our beck
and call. We need only to watch the sky,
to breathe against the madre flesh of night,
and know that morning whispers by and by
of oranges and sun, the day alight
with hope amante, uncurling the dawn
as promises, as flowers want to bloom,
their petals laughing at each sleepy yawn
awakening within our tiny room.
We celebrate another day, renew
this happiness, our new dreams. Solo tu.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
elegant

Some lovely poetic thoughts ~ from South of the Border perhaps.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Now here's a good piece, part of a series;

I'll have to go back now and read them all.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
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~uncurling the dawn

as promises, as flowers want to bloom,

their petals laughing at each sleepy yawn~

Man

I mean does it get better than that??

This is a collection of the female Don Juan

The female Casanova

A book of seduction and tenderness

It is amazing writing

Thank you

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
you have maintained excellence

throughout this series.

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