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Click hereAmarillo Rose: part one
"A Candle's glow"
From brushy moon shadows
spurs, clank and chime
stepping to the threshold of Lady Laura's
two bits for a good time
Her candle flickered
brighten curtains red
meant she had no suitors
"come on and warm the bed"
Knocks on knotted wood
tips a hat and brushed back hair
boots a shuffle
a lonely mans desire's dare
Little 'creek'
two long fingered hands open the door
inviting smile in leather and cleavage
boot click smiles across the floor
Washington silver layed on a table
cupped fingers blow
stranding teathered hair curls fall on bare shoulders
red curtains lost it's glow
Dusty trail hand shed his leather
bed spread back with gentle taps feathered
Two oil lamps lit in one tender touch
intertwined like a tumbleweed clump
sheets prarie ridden
passion soothing soul
the other coin jingled grin
the warm wind blow
Haste ushered breasts
"come again senior" said sensuous
red candle's burning ora
On the threshold of Lady Laura's
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part one of eight: Amarillo Rose
"A Candle's glow"
Art,
I love your work. I am an new poet on this site
and you were kind enough to comment on one of my pieces.
I think you mispelled "prairie" though.
I would invite you to see some of my recent postings.
Carol Anne
and I liked the stanza about the tumbleweeds...good imagery! It might have read more smoothly if the "Little creek" line was a bit longer, to balance the rhythm!
Art just wonderful.. slowly draws one into the visual aspects of the scene..my favorite was..
Quote:
sheets prarie ridden
passion soothing soul
the other coin jingled grin
the warm wind blow
Nice...hmmm... I was there for a split second... on to more..
Du Lac
inviting smile in leather and cleavage
boot click smiles across the floor~
Ooohhh great lines here. Your imagery has a smile of its own. I loved the theme and subject matter.
Ya takin us on a trip, behind closed doors.
The whole *feel* of the poem is swaggeringly sassy~~!!<winks n grins>
Going to read the next one~!!