- Erotic Poetry
- Amarillo Rose the cattlemens lament
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Amarillo Rose: part three
"The Cattlemens Lament"
Cattle drive's lament
repetitious as spring
usually in the 'blistering' sun shine
candle never seen
thunderous sound of heel clicking
others watched their watches ticking
Rocking front porch serenade sings
out, another cowboy Lady Laura brings
one by one they taste the nector
of sweet passion that rise
those she 'shined' and 'fancy'd'
got the Lady Laura surprise
Slurpy hiss's mix with kisses
all for the quickening
wet wiped rag of another stag
two bit smile's offering
corset gloss and stockings tore
linemen chuckled wanting more!
ramsacked bed clothes scattered floor
another tamed pony out the door
bare breast dances
sweet words romancing
little pricks with knives
to, please don't tell my wife
Lady Laura florished
when the cattlemen would cum
caressed their dreams
till she was numb
Boot heels silent across bare feet floor
yellow rose in left hand, amora
red candle glow tonight, no more
She-Wolf howel sound on the threshold of lady laura
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Amarillo Rose: part three
Part one: "A Candles glow"
Part two: "The Abrasive one"
Part three: "The Cattlemens Lament"
- COMMENTS
sackover 19 years agoIn the last stanza, if you had ended the second line with "no more-ah" , you would have created an interesting three word rhyme. Also, regarding "Little pricks with knives", did you mean to use the word "too"?
Du Lacover 19 years agoThis one was excellent. You can feel the built up tension of the men and the joy that Laura finds in one that catches her fancy... Tone changes, again! These poems are an artful display of outstanding seduction! The interested piqued in the first, more.. please.. then the second rawness making the reader go.. hmmmm and the third WOW. Delving into the inner core of your players.Then dropping off to the forbidden.. the she wolf that grabs your selfish erotism... money made.. time for Laura! I want to be Lady Laura.. that is how it made me feel! Great stuff.. Question is can I take more? HA.. lets go see!
Du Lac
tungtied2uover 19 years agowith each installment Art...that Lady Laura is a busy girl...
Annoraover 19 years agoYou are taking direction from your players. Bringing them more to life. More real.
Love the subtle change its flowing naturally no working hard for it. Place your pen to paper the rest will get done.
Great Part 3.....More please.
LilDarlinover 19 years agoWow..Love how you changed the tone of this poem as opposed to the previous two.
You imagery just keeps gettin better and better. Think you must have a big ole book lookin up all those playful phrases in. Loved this one too.
Left me with the feelin that there is change coming and err not the money kind <grins>
More Please~~!
