- Erotic Poetry
- Amarillo Rose the Hombre
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Amarillo Rose and the Hombre
Part 6
streaked a raw red sky
statue figured clouds fly
over mountains with no name
across rocky sunbaked plane
a yellow flower lie
sipping whiskey rye
front porch swinging
Amarillo Rose singing
bandelero guitar picked
macho spanish rips
sumbreo tilted back for sips
dancing dress dips
licking whiskey lips
lap grinding hips
arms wrapped into nape tickles
soft mounded breasts jiggle
ear whispering promises
binding dress unleases
rising in the cress's
muffled noise breezes
passions flame raged
cold winds change
with a cracking of a whip
flesh eating nip
An hombre from terilingua
bull whip with a stinger
Fast hands reach for steel
no match for the whip wheeled
'snap' and 'crack'
this Hombre lashed
till bandelero lay like a sack
wanted poster match
Then tied to a mule
silver dollar slewn
at the feet of lady Laura
"for your troubles, whore'a!"
The sun set lower than low
across the mile a candle's glow
waiting for the knock at the door
at the threshold of Lady Laura
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Amarillo Rose: part six
part one: "A Candle's glow"
part two: "The Abrasive one"
part three: "The Cattlemens Lament"
part four: the dueling duece"
part five: "the dwelling"
part six: "The Hombre"
- COMMENTS
LilDarlinover 19 years agoThe sun set lower than low
across the mile a candle's glow
waiting for the knock at the door
at the threshold of Lady Laura~
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Thes lines tell it all~~!!
Wow..Still holding us in the palm of your hand on this series. Loved the Imagery (again) and a lil humor I see here.
Dare we ask for More? (smiles)
sackover 19 years agoA stroke of genius and my favorite of the set so far. Bravo!
Du Lacover 19 years agoArt...
I read the last three of these. I feel the emptiness of Laura the "debauch" of a soul. A thirst unquenched. A dull sadness that drives her into the daily living of her life. Spelling...were you not totally connected to this piece? I also felt that this one did not flow as easily for you, not the rich depth of the passionate revelations of the others...but then again I like that..edging! On the verge of realms still to be delved into... still it was good! A sign of a good writer..
Du Lac
Annoraover 19 years agoSpelling or not its a fabulous read. One must enjoy how your enthusiasm catches you so you write it down.. How it comes to you.
Bravo Bravo
tungtied2uover 19 years agosince I feel I have to pick on something...spelling...otherwise, once again...wonderful.
