Amber Eyes [Barney & Miles]

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The cat is on the window sill,
Still for a moment,
Except for the end of his tail.

He scans the scene outside with amber eyes.
The skies are blue, too.

The breeze makes the
Leaves in the trees weave and spin,
And some begin to drift swiftly
To the ground below.
Their descent seems slow to me,
Though not to the cat.

He looks, again, for friend and foe,
But doesn't know the difference.
Smart cat, he!
Sees only unity.
And me.

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Short, sweet...

and pretty nice..

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
felines

The inscrutable ways of the family ~ house cat.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Smart cat indeed, as long as he's not watching the TV, then he's got a vision-system defect.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
This is really lovely

I love the unity in the ending, but this line:

The skies are blue, too.

does not seem to fit?

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