An Afterglow Sonnet

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A piquant squeeze on the exit wound. Mmmmmmm.
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A piquant squeeze on the exit wound. Mmmmmmm.
But the cheshire breaths slow, the moment strays.
The candy grin floats off into a room
as dark as a lover's face turned away.

Then rudely, an inner tasklist reasserts,
and urges once assigned an urgency meant
for vibrating missed appointment alerts
when he took "aaahhh, that's so...nice...," for consent,

seem enfabled now as daydreams at night.
Qualms cop their feel, questions itch and adhere
onto chafes and an inner mom invites
herself, blurting "just what's going on in here!?"

"Go away," she whimpers aloud and slumps
back onto lover and other mattress lumps.

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HarryHillHarryHillabout 10 years ago
Amusing and cheeky

a near sonnet nice form well done this line

(...The candy grin floats off into a room)

does not work well sonically

or trip from my clumsy lips

fix it willya?

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 10 years ago

This smart, imaginative, thought provoking. "...and an inner mom invites/ herself...." great lines.

tazz317tazz317about 10 years ago
I READ THIS SONNET

and was unable to realize. tk u mlj lv nv

buttersbuttersabout 10 years ago

recommended read over on the Poetry Forum for this unusual piece

really enjoyed some of your phrasing here.

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