an invitation to self : 1

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an invitation to self: 1

this morning
i reached for a silver mirror
i wanted to peek
to feel


i sat at the edge of the bed
blushing
as i opened my legs
trembling
as i ran my fingers up my thighs
straining
as i placed the mirror
biting
my lower lips
as i squinted

oh

hmmm

was that supposed to be good or bad?

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KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 17 years ago
Revelations by a poet; cheers to Amyfriend

From what you both have said/

In some strange combination/

My thoughts have carried me/

To my own revalations/

But as of now and further to the future/

I am too shy to speak/ (for once!!!)/

I also had some thoughts about/

the Vegina monolog/

And What is in a name/

But I was most inspired/

by amy’s cheerful:/

Good Morning!

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Just go ahead and say it/

To yourself say it/

“Good morning vegina”

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Just go ahead...

and say it: "Good morning vagina."... Loved it, thanks.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Looking

Mirror, Mirror, in my hand ~ what I see is really grand.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Welcome to Lit

With this hot little write!

Taking what RF said below one step farther, my suggestion for the ending goes something like this:

"as i squinted

wondering, will this be good or bad?

oh...

hmmm..."

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyabout 18 years ago
Flaming imagery ~

I can *see* where your going... Imagery here is hot !! The last line I would have left out, or went a bit more with it. Very steamy lil read here ~

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