- Non-Erotic Poetry
- an ode to poop
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You've been a part of me
Since longer than I care to recall
Now you are becoming a burden
Growing stronger than I can bear
The feeling of filling
tremendously exhilerating
All to give way once I let you go
Ending with emptiness
Internal pressure has been replaced
By a curious nothing
Waiting to be filled again
I'm sorry to give you a home
You don't want to leave
Upon your imminant departure
Trust, I will grunt and grieve
Dropping the children into the pool
Each splashes all around
One floats, the others fall
Every one is sucked down
Where our best can escape
Underwater solace
in a better place
Farewell dear stinky feces
Time for you to part from me
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 17 years agoHere is the test for the guts and the gutsiness, or if you wish the taste or the tastelessness of each reader. It’s our litmus test (I can’t stop laughing here).
Let each reader step forward and express his/her opinion.
To me, even the title is ridiculously funny. Putting together Ode and you know what is just so silly! **************************************************
Anyway, Time to be a little serious. My dear mentor, LeBroz. as I am sure you know all too well, before the Romantic movement (reg. which my Lit. professor authoritatively once asserted: “We are all the children of the romantic movement”), lower body parts, functions and even their noises were exuberantly mentioned, discussed and laughed at in all forms of known art, yes - INCLUDING POETRY. *******************************************
Final serious point. Let us not forget that in North America the norm setting leading group has been (and to a degree still is) the Puritans and their cultural ethical heritage. **********************************************
Having said that, lets have fun (not too much of course!) with this boisterous lower humor fun (don’t forget to wash hands before dinner!)
duddle146about 17 years agoMind if I hold my breath ~ while I rate this one. *laughing*
Snowbunnyover 18 years agoI think your poem was funny as hell...made me laugh out loud! good stuff...anal humor is always funny.
-snowbunny
