- Non-Erotic Poetry
- An Untouched Flower
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Click hereAn Untouched Flower
An untouched flower
a virgin’s wistful figure
coincide and await self discovery
yearning, striving
to be plucked from the garden of innocence.
Rain's soft drops
sliding hands- cool to the touch
slowly streaming down my body
fueling this emerging thirst of desire.
Fiery sparks
two eager, novice bodies
meld and mesh
creating heavenly encompassing flames.
A beautiful tapestry
Vibrant, luminous colors
weaving in and out
as our minds and bodies
yield what we can only hope to express.
Gentle crimson flushes
crowd my cheeks
temperature rises higher, and higher,
and higher still
competing with the heat emitting from our passionate embrace.
A white dove
spreading its wings
for the first time
taking flight
I hover suspended in my new life, in my new love
landing in your arms as I make my way down.
Visions of the unknown
images of desire
dreams of you
expressed in words by an untouched flower.
- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoLove's first magic ~ that first mystical awakening as passion is ignited. Lovely images.
LeBrozover 17 years agoGerund overload
Makes it too passive;
You've a good thing here
With work it can have quite a punch.
Anonymousover 17 years agohowever, so many -ing words! gerunds, right? who cares except those who CALL themselves poets.
anyway..."slowly streaming" I have an enormous problem with. contradiction in terms. its pretty bad...
keep trying, you have it in you
