- Erotic Poetry
- And I thought of you and I
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Click hereOf you and I
I saw a drawing of lovers embracing,
And I thought it was you and I.
But I was not sure,
Their faces were hidden by their passion.
Her slender arms, reach up on his shoulders.
His arms relaxed, circle the slope of her hips,
With hands resting lightly on the wonderful curve
Of her rear, just below the twin dimples.
Their legs entwined, as bodies press together from knee to navel.
The swells of her breasts push teasingly against his chest.
Slender... A swan's neck arches up to angle her face,
To receive his mouth and full lips, in a slow, tender lingering kiss,
The joy of togetherness.
Natural...Naked they cling to each other as one...
In a common need,
For desires sweet surrender.
- COMMENTS
vrosej10over 13 years agounfortunately you let yourself down with the two glaring cliches at the end (lingering kiss and sweet surrender). I'm still gunna recommend it cause it was good.
buttersover 13 years agoyou take your first three lines and see how you develop the thought from there, mikeIvy. your write here shows us the picture, and it's quite gentle and sweet, but those first lines are (for me) far more interesting as a reader.
