- Erotic Poetry
- Angel Kiss
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Click hereShivers shrill down human spine
a body's rumble of inner and outer shrine
where emotional and physical collide
tightened muscles wabble then glide
without will, rippled skin wave
total UN-still
eyes closed for a moment
of flesh and bone tremor
in accelerated spasms
visual glimmer
terrestrial quake
entity hick-up
a cold chill shake
Neck hairs raised
along goose bump alleys
after shock of shivers
nerve endings, rivers
uncontrollable bliss
an Angel's kiss!
- COMMENTS
RhymeFairyalmost 19 years agoA lovley kiss for a prince perhaps...
I love this poem.
A lil dark mystery, added to which.. an angels kiss...
More please~
jthserraover 19 years agoespecially in the first stanza. I also liked your rhyme pairs there, so much I wished you carried the rhyme throughout the poem. The final stanza picked up the rhyme scheme, but lacked the intensity of interest the first stanza created. It was as if you ran out of energy, which may have been intended intimating some fatigue, but it seems the angel's kiss would bolster the strength here.
The alliteration was carried through the poem with sucess, but again, with just a bit less of impact as you created in the first stanza. This is a good poem, with some potential to be even better. Set it aside for awhile and look at it in a few weeks or so and see what you think.
jim : )
My Erotic Taleover 19 years agoloved the idea of an angel's kiss
is that what happens when I get chills?
Shivers, very interesting.
great poem L~
