- Erotic Poetry
- Angular Woman
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Click heresoftness in an angular woman
worth the search
voyage of discovery
it's there my friend
against a skeletal frame
breasts seem to float
roll in a beam sea
detach and wave alone
sea foam softness lives
high on upper thighs
entrance padded for comfort
harbor to rest a head
follow her bikini bottom
skinny legs expand
above each hem
fullness hides in view
angles live above the breast
pride surgeons can not sell
long necks on straight shoulders
cheek bones facing the sun
contrast in forms
angular and long
yet shade and softness lives
spruce on a rocky shore
- COMMENTS
YDDalmost 20 years agoI wish you had followed your sea voyage metaphor more persistently throughout this poem.
It is very good where you have, but seems weaker in the final three stanzas where you digress until the last line.
You have some eye catchers like:
?against a skeletal frame
breasts seem to float
roll in a beam sea?
An enjoyable read.
Syndra Lynnalmost 20 years agoI love it when a man speaks this way. Strong, loving pride. I envy her. Nice work.
Maria2394almost 20 years agosandspike, this is breathtakingly tender and so romantic!! I just love it, really good work, thank you :)
