tagNon-Erotic PoetryAnnie's a Lachrymose Ten Year Old

Annie's a Lachrymose Ten Year Old

bygreenmountaineer©

clutching a black and white photograph
of a pure white lacy two year old
as if it were a daguerreotype

from the Gilded Age of wrap around
porches with fine China tea sets
and maple trees on Maple Street
she once saw in a magazine.

But four flights down the walk-up tonight
prowling around on the street
are dog pack boys at midnight
looking for bitches forever in heat

as a hot August city breeze blows
and a midnight ragged Annie decides
it's time to put a thirty year old
photograph down and go to sleep.

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by greenmountaineer08/26/14

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I always enjoy reading your comments because of the effort you bring to them and how they help me critically look at what I've written from a different perspective.
The issue you raise is, in fact, themore...

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by Cleardaynow08/24/14

Like this a lot

I am sure I commented on this a day or so ago. As I wrote it in Word and pasted it in, possibly I copied it into the wrong poem – which might have been confusing for the author. Hopefully instead, inmore...

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by Ashesh908/21/14

The contrast between the Gilded Age porches with fine China tea sets ....'n ...

Prowling dog pack boys @ midnite is sharp ......Killing ! 5- ed.

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