Another Blue Wrold

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Angeline
Angeline
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Ocean of blues
and the siren foam
that carries me away,

lifts me as I drown,
drowns me as it sings
in salted stings that ebb
through years and ebb
from me somewhere
between the tides and moon

where I was drowned
and woke too soon.

Angeline
Angeline
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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Hue of Blue

This exquisite rendering almost leaves a tangy salty taste in your mouth as you work your way through. Beautiful.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Excellently done

Invites rereading multiple times

Just to taste the words again and

Feel the composition's

Vibrancy.

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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'and the siren foam

that carries me away'

I love it and i love how it carries me away.

sacksackover 18 years ago
a pleasant read...

I liked the repeat of the word "ebb"...you make something like this appear so easy to do, an art in itself!

steve portersteve porterover 18 years ago
blue...

...my favorite color...i love the way you relate it to color, emotion, music and even a certain melancholy nostalgia...melodic rhyme scheme and wonderful metaphor of "the siren foam that carries me away"...thanks.

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