Another Deer Path

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I want to feel the scratch
from the burrs and brambles of your journey,
the sting of antiseptic that leaves
a trail of cleanliness through dust
and mud.

Have you discovered
the other half to my truth?
We stub toes on the Rosetta stone,
we bleed in Greek.

It means everything, everything.
Step aside, let me stomp down
the sticker bushes until we reach
the cloven mud prints
and a path of bent grass that leads us
to the moss covered sleeping grounds.


for T.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
nice piece...

...meaning your poem, of course...

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Striving

Long torturous path to the bedroom. Beautiful metaphor.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A nature piece with more truth than is nature seen.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Lead On

Bleeding in Greek ranks right up there with brain saliva.

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