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Click hereI did it, I went back to them
Where mentholated goodness over powers the harshness
And the smell reminds me of friends no longer visited
Of life in happiness, without the strife of today
it's like a night of angry sex with someone you used to love
Left to wake unsatisfied, chaffed, and raw
mentholated goodness. However, I hate "it's like", it's like... a horrible phrase. Anyhow, some good personal style leaks out in this, I do enjoy that.
i mentioned this poem in the new poem review thread in the poetry forum - wildsweetone