Another Time

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ANOTHER TIME

Another day in any other time
We ought to have loved..
Perhaps so very fine
Aging together like the finest of wine.

I might have been there
Or you right here.
We could have taken strolls together
In the park.

Perhaps ridden horses through
The country side....
Maybe we could have
Shared an intimate touch.

Enjoying the sunny day
While dining on
A champagne brunch.

We could have danced in the moonlight
Gazing into each others eyes
Holding one another so tight.

I could have surprised you daily
With my special kiss
I would have given you so
Much more than this.

We could have run barefoot
Through the rain..
Not feeling it's cold
Never feeling any pain.

We could have held hands
Sharing an intimate joke
And after lovemaking
Yes, we could even have
Shared a smoke.

Never having our feelings
We share become some
Unspoken evil, bane....
Or growing to dispise,
Disregard, or disdain.

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
time passing

The operative words here are ~ We could...

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Rhyme pattern's a bit ragged;

Seems to dissolve in the middle,

Then, towards the end, seems a bit more forced.

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 19 years ago
Well written

A lovely poem with some great lines.

Daisy MayDaisy Mayover 19 years ago
Nice

If you can fit in those rhymes and still make it intense, more power to you! Nicely done.

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