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Click herePeter and John,
Two men of Light,
Shadowy Lillith,
They call to life.
With truth Peter slaps her face,
While kissing her heart,
Isolation no more to be,
Slicing steps of living death.
Passionate voice, drawing her in,
John breeds her poetic sin,
Merging spirits, divided souls,
Amending whispers of virgin gospel.
Apostles of her Gnostic truth,
One former thrice denied,
Other, sage of revelations,
Both sliding into her sacred grave.
Birthing dead children,
Secrets of the past,
Through veils of passion,
Lillith craves her moment of birth.
Barred from Eden,
She breathes no hope,
Bereft, she lies for all,
Legs spread, fettered to the gates.
Prisoner to her own desires,
To her the Apostles came,
Lust freed the gates,
Penetrating her serpent womb.
Carnal knowledge of her soul,
Chaste they remain,
Decorous to her fleshy dolor,
Crucifying Lilliths shame.
Slap her face and kiss her heart,
Divinity not superficial,
Forced honesty of sundered confessions,
Lillith stripped of all defenses.
Shorn of her myth,
Embracing candor of pregnant moments,
Apostles amity, soulful coitus,
Submissively quelling her fears.
Apostles of her Gnostic truth,
Both sliding into her sacred grave,
Unfettered Oracle now tours the gates,
God’s mystical epithet slides from her lips.
dlt © Jan. 9 2005
to successfully integrate erotic elements into this poem without degrading it to "soft porn." Bravo!
you got me right away. I love this *religious * poetry, anything to make a person think. I love to watch how you have grown so much so fast, keep it up!!
very well written, wow Du, that was awesome
this is a shining example of erotic poetry at
it's best. Really! The word play and visuals
were spectacular. Thanks for the wonderfully
'HOT' read. <grinin'>