- Erotic Poetry
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genius lover
you set my heart ablaze
to warm my body
in that heat beyond compare
touch your hands to my face
and take me back to that place where things begin
where time stops
and dreams realize
step across that line and make me your slave
always and forever yours
your eyes on mine
and hands to creep
passion to free my soul
fill that ache
draw my cry
it will not be my last
Flesh on flesh
sweat and tears
force enough to make me shake
guidance and a sigh
crash me back to earth and then
seal it with a lie
press your lips to mine my friend
rough but satisfied
forbidden love till we meet again
In vain we won't have died
- COMMENTS
Maria2394about 18 years agoI see I didnt have to wait long. I would only suggest some restructuring, just a tiny bit. I like your use of internal rhyme, Im so glad you didnt force an end rhyme on each line, that would have ruined this. Howevere, just good work here...
wlecome to LIt :)
maria
