Approval Through Denial

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vrosej10
vrosej10
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last night she inked 'beautiful' on my wrist—
I grew rainbow chiffon wings.
her lips slipped nipple, navel, clit—
I burst, an overripe plum under her tongue.

this morning we had coffee with friends—
she fended my hand off her leg
smiling, told everyone about her new guy.

vrosej10
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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
You do......

.......these "slice of life" poems so well. Lovely images.

Tess

tigerjentigerjenabout 13 years ago

First stanza was the best part for me.....second stanza I felt didn't really fit with the first stanza......

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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that is so sad but I do find the second stanza to be more prose than the first

fridayamfridayamabout 13 years ago
Yes

I liked this, saw the situation, knew the characters. A good short novel compressed into a few lines. Lovely.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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nice twist, but otherwise too straight though

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