Aquatic Fury ~ liquid zen

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(The Elements)

Water the element of change,
Molecule gymnastics, flowing opposites,
Light into dark twisting negative to positive.
Yin and yang of rain.

Liquid's life of cycling dawns,
mystic mornings mist, levitates and rises
molded, manipulated then drawn by gravity,
showering a sunset.

Sodden gray clouds fill the horizon,
Creator’s cerebrum exposed heavy with thought,
liquid wisdom plummets to a thirsty earth,
parched Tellus swills in cerebellar milk.

Pelting droplets of water descending,
thunder cracks, rumbles, lightening fingers reaching,
each fraternal drop joins the multitude and become the saturating
scent of the cleansing.

Gliding towards soil in hopes of healing,
shattered against man's crust of poisoned tar.
Anguished shock and fury! Recoiling in horror,
A crippled crawl over the edge. . . soaking mother’s breast.

The raging river's rising resurrection,
earthly veins pulse and surge in a pounding destructive wake!
Clashing swells wave in rejoice of earthly domination
un-merciful current drags every creature with it.

Mother cradles precious cargo along vaulted river beds.
River sonata, a flowing lullaby of building tempos,
licking, tasting, devouring fresh soil of lusting meadows.
Water husbandry, a give and take, recession complete.

Raging rivers mingle with vast Ocean swells,
the surf's arm grasps handfuls of beach in each waves reach.
Aquatic feast of Soil and Sand in the Art of erosion,
desert canyon walls lay in a deep-bellied sea.

Simple complexity of Gaia’s blood,
healing destruction nestled in mystic motes,
ebbing breath floods extant entities,
Life: gushing baptism of birth exhales death’s thirst.

The Aquatic realm of creatures deep, strives.
That which gives life and death to us all in it's cycles.
Spied by a thirsty moon that died parched,
a huge drop of deep blue water that spins in space, Earth!


By Du Lac & My Erotic Tale

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
HARD HOH IS ONLY ICE

while soft h20 leaves no film. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A mystical aura surrounds and a liquid drop of water with an entire world seemingly contained therein.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A mystical aura surrounds and a liquid drop of water with an entire world seemingly contained therein.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Incredible picture...

words plays havoc with the refractive index

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Exquisite in every way.

The Art Work breathtaking as a pair of gossamer wings ~ lovely and delicate in the mornings mist. A raindrop on a branch illustration is the perfect accompanying picture.

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