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Click hereAre we nocturnal,
creatures of dusk,
wide pupil night vision
enhanced?
Deep sea monsters,
clinging to bare rock
and one another,
like nothing else
mattered.
As if we could
go on like this
forever,
in silent,
carnal nexus,
exploring the depth
of each other's
oceans.
Are we amazon,
astral, ancient,
spanning from history
to hysteria?
Rampant scribes
rewriting legends
by taste and touch
alone.
Titans in clashed
tectonic tension,
as granite, as gold,
and melting
from within.
Are we ever
anywhere as eternal
as in that madness,
a singular pinnacle
crystal moment,
when spiral galaxies
intersect,
and embrace?
...this morning on my first run-through and couldn't think how to comment. I've read it several times, each time finding a new angles, new images. It's intensely erotic and beautifully written. Five.
I truly enjoy that you write about the universe and this one is just awesome.I especially like the images I got from this part..
Titans in clashed
tectonic tension,
as granite, as gold,
I can just feel the plates a moving as they clashed :) great work!!
I enjoyed watching this one grow. I truely liked the word play with this one. Mezmerizing!
....these words very much. Very original and very well-handled.
Those first two stanzas are fantastic.
Also:
"spanning from history
to hysteria?"
Very original and good read.