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Click hereDo You feel me Master, do You hear my silent sigh,
Do You know when I hurt, do You know why it is I cry,
Do You hear the pain in my voice, do You feel the ice upon my soul,
Do You know the harbored fear, do You truly know my roll,
Are You strong enough to force words from my sealed lips
Are You strong enough to dry my eyes
Are You strong enough to break the ice
Are You strong enough, or is it simply a roll of the dice
I noticed in some of your work, you have caps. in unnecessary places. Maybe you're trying to make the master stand out, but I really don't think it's needed. Also, some better punctuation here with question marks. Still an amazing read. I hope you don't mind me saying. No harm ever meant.
Chris~