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oneiria
oneiria
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The white chalk outline
      of your body on the sidewalk
fails to do you justice.

oneiria
oneiria
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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago
Ouch!

A little pill of potency. Well done.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
people

throw coins

in appreciation

@ the sidewalks ........

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
You

paint some graphic mental images in sparse lines

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