- Erotic Poetry
- as i savor your evaporated salt
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see the shell that i found from the sea
this pink and polished cleft that spirals
into the damp shadow of her darkness
washed abandoned and now reclaimed
still dripping wet in essential waters and
glistening beneath the pubescent dawn
and now i hold you in my hands.
i examine you yes i am a curious man
and i am excited by the thought of
what once occupied your vital space
was it a good life it must have been
if your rosy glow is any sign then
it could only have been exquisite
but now my love you belong to me.
how smooth how wet you are to touch
how my fingers slide so comfortably
into your profound and silken slot
when i hold you to my face and lick
my humid tongue tastes the primitive
residue of a very personal history
as i savor your evaporated salt.
- COMMENTS
YDDalmost 20 years agoWhen she is near your ear?
A metaphor excellently presented,
subtle yet powerful.
Not a new comparison, but very effectively presented.
A certain read for all who would be poets.
Angelinealmost 20 years agoSuch a wnderful metaphor, Steve, carried throughout the poem so well, and as delicately wrought as the subject of the poem. Oh yes, nice to see a submission from you again. :)
jthserraalmost 20 years agothe wonderful salt of your words. Well done.
jim : )
