- Non-Erotic Poetry
- As Only You Can See Me
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Touch my body
Not with your hands, but
with your eyes. Gently
stroke the curves of my body.
Softly caress my features with each
passing of your eyes.
Look at me.
Not from the outside in but,
from the inside out.
See the memories that make
me who I am, the experiences
I’ve been through that
forged me into the being that
possesses the space before you.
Allow me to be me for you.
Allow me to be me.
Allow me to be.
As only you can see me.
ALL FEEDBACK IS WELCOME. GOOD OR BAD, I WOULD APPRECIATE IT.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoHer plea and warning, all in the same breath, "Allow me to be me." Don't try to change her, accept her for who she is.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI enjoyed the essence of this work. There is a soft desire that burns in the rhetoric. Emotional qualities of this work could be brought forth more with a breaking into stanzas. Pause, reflection... and then a jump into the next line. Visually it needs the breaks... to see the hidden sighs within the breath of the poem.
mentioned in the Sunday on Monday reviews
du lac~
Jennifer Calmost 19 years agoAn excellent piece
of poetry. Seeing
someone for the person
they really are, who they
are to you starting from
the inside.
I Loved it.
Thank you.
~ J
