- Non-Erotic Poetry
- As We Left
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Drawn devotedly
to invisible lines
of leaned back chairs
and crossed arms
you exposed to me
a far-fetched reality
where it was not all about
fingers and curves.
Just a glance or two
felt overwhelmingly right
and seductively wrong
as I leaned over, fishing
for a man’s footsteps
to pound out from a boy,
grasp hands behind my back,
catch the spirit heartily.
So don’t look downcast now
when you could have easily
in a twist, pound and tremble
left in footsteps echoing.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 16 years agoSo well done, leaving it to the mind of the reader to complete an excellent drawing.
Liarover 16 years ago"for a man’s footsteps
to pound out from a boy,
grasp hands behind my back,
catch the spirit heartily."
I do hope you're aware of on how many different levels this is an excellent set of lines. Prosody, rhythm and choice of style changing to reflect every new image, and still, a seamless read.
