As You Rain

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It must be the rain,
that whispers through my thought.
The closest in comparison -
to the way I see,
and feel you.

As a sky that
opens to spill it's drops
upon the thirsty earth below
The ground awaits her eruption,
to take in all that she can give.

Absorbing what is,
the quenching of life,
through parched roots
of all existence,
That without-
would surely wilt and die.

As you are the sky,
And to I -

All that flourishes so deep
and so complete-
And to the greater sum
sends inner balance.
of all that we are,
long enough to dream
of all we wish to become.

Open up
and,

Pour.

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WriterDomWriterDomover 15 years ago
One day

I'll read all your poems. I enjoy them all.

DuPainDuPainabout 16 years ago
You

You rock baby !!!

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
evocative

The joys of rainfall ~ hearing it splattering down smell the fresh earth saturated once again.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Let It Rain...

...let it rain. I feel your words falling on me like the rain...and it feels so good.

ty,bd

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
pour

breaking the dam of emotions (~_~) great write

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