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Asaba
Tasting her
cardamom-spiced kiss
I felt a tremble
as I removed her asaba
and ran my fingers
through her long
black hair.
I seriously love how you slice the lines in your poems. You just break everything up, and it should come off choppy but instead it's really organic and raw.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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What a great poem. Simple but effective. I loved the image you pianted in this poem. Sensuous, rich and delicate. Nice one.