- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Ashland Hospital Haiku Set
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Scrap iron lady
plays a sweet flute concerto
to eager-earred ferns
Hooked to loud machines
patients contemplate their fates
beside bright flowers
Mouth-hidden doctors
walk tension-pulsing hallways,
cheating the reaper
Pleasant old ladies
with bright garbs and lonely smiles
rest in green gardens
- COMMENTS
twelveooneover 11 years agoScrap iron lady
plays a sweet flute concerto
to eager-earred ferns
this sounds like a great opener to something more extended
tazz317over 11 years agothey are the long lost forgotten, TK U MLJ LV NV
HarryHillover 11 years agooften follow the 5/7/5 form ...but rarely show the opposition of the first and last lines.
an interesting write nevertheless
