Assertive, with Racy Acidity

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idly, this afternoon
I thought about the flavor of your skin
and inferred through Socratic method
it would be sugary, but cinnamon,
like a whole box of Red Hots
chugged for the rush
and flare of all that
brushing against
my tongue
but

then I thought
there also would be salt
from our exercise

and that I had better sample points
randomly selected:

sole, thigh, back of knee, fingertip,
waist, earlobe

lips, lips, lips, lips, lips
the hollow
of your spine

and other places numerous
but very carefully chosen
so I'm thinking now Sancerre

bone dry, nightly aromatic, intense flavors of peaches &
gooseberries

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
*****

Someone has been reading Tom Stevenson.

Five.

PandoraGlittersPandoraGlittersover 11 years ago
Yummy

gooseberries. Makes the reader tingle with sense imagery.

demure101demure101over 11 years ago
Beautiful

thank you!

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
And that my friends

works for any vintage

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 11 years ago

Unlike 1201, I liked "lips, lips, lips, lips, lips," given the title, but I agree with Desejo about "bone dry" because of the peaches that follow until a wine connoisseur tells me otherwise.

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