At Hermano's Mexican Dream Theater

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At Hermano’s Dream Theatre
(for madmen only,)

they eat juicy garbage grinders
or colorful Spanish lobsters,
(depending on the light of the moon.)

There’s loud smacking, electrified fur, proud laughing,
and absinthe to absent-mindedly stir.

Newton is nightly tarred and feathered
and the colors and cultures meld and twirl…
till they make a twilight door so you Can
go where you might love to but…
if you’re like me,
were maybe afraid of hell-fire,

should you without sanctified intentions…
simply lay with a girl!

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
dreams

food galore ~ sexual appetite waiting to be satisfied.

lobomaolobomaoover 17 years ago
•) I've eatten there many times

I perfered the Enchiladas Bruegel

Although nextime I think I'll try

the Tlacoyos de Bosch, as they looked delicious

ah for those nastursium and eel salads

with just the right amount of lime

Newton's sticky apple was a let down

but the floor show could not be beaten

I escaped with my life and a few coins in change

and this dumb t shirt

Velvet_PollyVelvet_Pollyover 17 years ago
you are

a talented write, you could tighten this up a bit, lose the ellipses, mere distractions. I like your descriptions. good work

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Dreams may come...

Elegant beauty and so very well written. A joy to Read!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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