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  the atlas assures that
  from the west to the east coast
  is as far as
  from the east to poland

  the calendar decided long ago
  that the distance from birth to emigration
  is shorter than from emigration to death

  that the weather is beautiful
  californian
  will be shown by a digital camera
  with a super-wonderful resolution

  it's harder to see details
  in the images
  painted by memory

wh,
2006-05-05

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Worth a 100

for the last three lines, no other grabbers, more like gab

signed

MNS

maybe

but remember you said I shouldn't exist

TzaraTzaraalmost 18 years ago
Very elegant,

Senna Jawa. I enjoyed this very much.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Brilliant

Only one word to describe this: brilliant

Extremely well crafted with simple but effective imagery. I loved that second stanza and that ending was superb.

Deserves a 10

p.s your poem has been mentioned on todays reviews

Vampiredust