Attar of Spring

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Du Lac
Du Lac
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Distended sprigs surging into blue welkin,
Winter storms a fading limbo,
Brown warmth of autumn leaves,
Dry in the sun.

Self doubt invades the soul
when separated from the love that
makes us whole.

"The person old in days won't hesitate
to ask a little child seven days old
about the place of life, and that person will live.

For many of the first will be last, and will become a single one."

Glare crusted rooftop drooling,
Attar of spring.

dlt © March 17 2005

quote from: 4th parable, The Gospel of Thomas, The Nag Hammadi Library,
Selection from Robert J. Miller, ed., The Complete Gospels: Annotated Scholars Version. (Polebridge Press, 1992, 1994).

Du Lac
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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
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Lovely rendering with picturesque images.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Setting aside for the moment the other images contained herein, I prefer to focus on the element of rebirth embodied in Spring. Very nicely done.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Spring is a religious experience!

ty,bd

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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It is amazing what you can do with words. Like a couple of the others I loved the 'Self doubt invades...' stanza.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
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This really is a good poem. Thanks for sharing it.

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