Attic Poems

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What words he must have spoken
to have left such a strong enchantment
on the girl the woman once was.

What love her heart must have sang
as the melody of his emotion rang out
and touched the woman she'd become.

A birthday wish, a lover's verse
all tied in ribbon, hidden
in a silken purse he must have given.

Let me bring these shades forward
to show them what happiness waits
outside of these pages.

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
endearing

Looking back into the Attic of a Sweet Couples past.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The beauty here is that this piece leaves all the best implied, but very obvious.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
nice images

and had a warm feeling...enjoyed...blue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
sweet!

So hard to imagine, as a child, the loves of our parents, grandparents...nicely done--

I enjoyed this, seeing how you manipulated your own voice in looking at your possibilities from another set of eyes...

~anna

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 19 years ago
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Good poem and very nice first strophe.

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