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- August Afternoon
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Newly-felled woodland
a tangle of brambles
foxgloves
mountain-ash shoots
cut into halves by
a yellowish path and
the sudden smell
of stinkhorns
from the wood beyond:
a memory that hurts
just above the eyes.
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DawnJover 11 years agoA pretty piece!
Small pictures, vividly described nonetheless! I'm puzzled by the last two lines...the memory causes a headache? Perhaps something in the mind? Regardless, I like the effect of the poem.
SweetOblivionover 11 years agoNicely expressed as ever
and to the point: I liked this - very much indeed. M
