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Click hereHow ludicrous these efforts to translate
Into one's private tongue a public fate!
Instead of poetry divinely terse,
Disjointed notes, Insomnia's mean verse!
—John Shade, "Pale Fire"
I am a man and yet not "man," it seems—
Mere heteronym, just one of several beings,
Like rolls of coin struck from a common plate.
How ludicrous, these efforts to translate
My several selves to one coherent thing,
Be it elfin poet, troll, or Ming
The Merciless, to map moods, to conflate
Into one's private tongue a public fate.
I am that I am: An author, true
To my own interests and needs, to strew
Across the page my bland, unleavened verse,
Instead of poetry divinely terse.
How can it matter who I am? The lines
Are either good or bad in their designs
Alone; they either work or they disburse
Disjointed notes, Insomnia's mean verse.
Though ending couplet is not quite in form,
John Shade himself were quite outside the norm.
I enjoyed the poem and think I understood it but for this line....
Alone; they either work or they disburse
coins are mentioned early in the poem but I can't see the logic in 'disburse', for me it just brings me to a grinding halt. Maybe the problem is me.
Very good
wondered about stanza 3 if that should be 'I am what I am' and stumbled slightly on the last line of 4 but they are mere nit picks .... gets my 5
Five and a recommend. You guys out there doing rhyme, this is how you do it if you have to do rhyme in serious work. The is very well done PG. I am impressed. You took my advice about the end rhyming words interacting as units of meaning. Plus that quote is gold.