Avaricious Earnings

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What do you mean, Joey has it?
It's unfair he got his first.
I'm far more deserving.

Do you hear the demons' gurgle
As that whisper leaves your lips?

You ask me to feed the hungry?
It's better that they forget
The taste of fat.

Do you feel the demons' fire
As your penury fuels the flames?

Turn up the heat, it's cold tonight?
I suggest you don a sweater,
Here's one I cast off a year ago.

Do you smell the oil smoking
As they ready your bath in hell?
___________________________

We know you've worked so hard
And reaped but small reward.
Did you take time to share
The fruits of your labour?

Ah, avaricious sinner,
'Tis you who's earned my prayers.
Heed this gentle warning,
Give alms away, today.

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6 Comments
AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Very nicely done...

with splashes of pure brilliance. Unfortunately life is not so good to everyone and there are very needy people out there, but many do suffer in silence.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Greed.

Doing harm to the least among us ~ Maybe readying a bath in Hell isn't such a bad idea.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The counter-point presented here, greed is not good.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
I would hope

that you have gathered this series and readied it to send off for fame and some measure of fortune, really thoughtful, intense poems Chgampagne, I am really enjoying, and anticipating ... :rose:

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Stunning

dark write with sharp images. Well done, champ

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